The annual Leonid meteor shower will occur this weekend, so our River Houses poem-of-the-week for the third week of November is a gem drawn from the world’s small store of meteor poems: “Stars, I have seen them fall” by A.E. Housman (1859–1936):
Stars, I have seen them fall,
But when they drop and die
No star is lost at all
From all the star-sown sky.
The toil of all that be
Helps not the primal fault;
It rains into the sea,
And still the sea is salt.
A great poem — and this is a great poem — can become your friend for life, and as with any new friend, you need to take some time to get acquainted. We always recommend looking at structure first, before you even start to think about meaning; this teaches your students to see poems as finely crafted pieces of literary labor and not just spontaneous assemblages of words.
Housman was a literary master-craftsman, and his structural skill is very much on display here. Notice first that the poem consists of two complete sentences that divide the work precisely in half. Next, count the syllables: each line has exactly six, with no irregularities. Note also, remarkably, that with the single exception of the word primal, the entire poem is composed of one-syllable words. That’s a very hard thing to do — invite your students to write two good 24-word sentences using only one-syllable words, and you’ll see that it requires some effort.
What about the rhyme scheme? It’s simple and exact, with no off-rhymes: fall–die–all–sky be–fault–sea–salt (ABAB CDCD). The meter is formally iambic trimeter — a very short and tight form — and that’s easy to see in the second line: “But when′ they drop′ and die′.” A more natural reading of many of the lines will depart from this heavy iambic beat, however, because it can come across as too jingly or sing-songy in such a short poem. For example, the third line could be formally scanned: “No star′ is lost′ at all′” — a sing-songy rendering. But it’s more natural and effective to read it aloud as: “No′ star′ is lost′ at all′” — a reading with two strong initial pulses that emphasize the idea of “No star” being lost.
What about meaning? Housman was a Classical scholar who was knowledgeable about ancient astronomy, philosophy, and religion. The two halves of the poem contrast the world of the heavens — Classically imagined as perfect and unchanging — with the defective and imperfect “sublunary” world in which we mortals live. Even though stars seem to fall, the heavens remain perfect: “No star is lost at all.” Our earthly existence is the opposite. No matter how hard we try — “the toil of all that be” — we can never achieve the perfection of the heavens because “the primal fault,” Original Sin in the Christian worldview, makes perfection impossible. Brine, not pure water, is what we mortals must taste in life.
What other wonderful words have you found and what literary discoveries have you made in your homeschool this week? 😊
❡ All the star-sown sky: If a special line or turn of phrase happens to strike you in one of our weekly poems, just copy it onto your homeschool bulletin board for a few days and invite your students to speak it aloud a few times — that’s all it takes to begin a new poetical friendship and learn a few lovely words that will stay with you for life. 😊
❡ Explore more: The Poetry Foundation’s website (poetryfoundation.org) includes biographies and examples of the work of many important poets (including A.E. Housman) that are suitable for high school students and homeschool teachers.
❡ Here, said the year: This post is one of our regular homeschool poems-of-the-week. Print your own River Houses poetry calendar for the whole year at riverhouses.org/calendars and follow along with us as we visit forty-eight of our favorite friends.